Monday Morning

a couple fo days ago, i had the worst monday. u know how they say monday sucks? well it's true! hahahaha.... it feels like u have this bad hangover from the weekend's bottle of fun. X) anyway, i wrote a poem about that particular Monday morning that morning as it turned out to be not so bad after all cause the first class of the day was canceled! well, here it is. tell me what u guys think! oh yeah, no part of this poem may be reproduced in any way without the writer's (that's me) permission. enjoy the poem! :)

Monday Morning

The piercing glow intrudes my serene sleep,

Restless, I inhale a breath so deep.

Feels like a weekend robbed, auld lang syne,

I yearn for my Monday peace of mind.

How saccharine the sound, my ears, slaked,

as I struggle to keep my eyes awake.

Good news, good news, a gem so scarce,

I receive it, in my eyes, spark stars.

The first lecture of the day, unredeemed,

Heads rest a lay, in thy warm tender dream.

Comments

[seyra]

i guess we have mutual feeling for monday mornings. hee. this one is better cos it's shorter. more compact & straight forward. haha. i really dont noe how to comment in details but i think it's good. keep it up mann.